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For as long as he could remember, the littlest puppy had lived under the porch of an abandoned house with his mother and his brothers and sisters.  It was dark and warm there, and in the afternoon lines of sunshine came in through the cracks between the boards above them.  His mother would go out each day to hunt for food.  When she came back she would tell the puppies about the big world outside their home. 

 Mother told them of big creatures called man that would sometimes be nice and feed them, and other times would throw things to hurt them.  She described cats, which were great fun to chase, but armed with very sharp claws. She brought mice and rats for them to eat. After the puppies ate, Mother would teach them how to hunt for prey.  She would tell them of brave deeds done by other dogs in history.  She told them to be proud of being from such a fine family of dogs. 

 One day something strange jumped into their home.  Some of the puppies were afraid of it, even though it wasn’t very big.  Great Hunter remembered everything his mother had taught them.  He stalked the creature and pounced on it.  He took it into his mouth and bit it.  It crunched between his teeth and tasted delicious. 

 When his mother came home and heard what he had done she was very pleased.  That day his mother named him Great Hunter.  She told him he must always remember that he was a great hunter who had killed his prey.  This time it had been a grasshopper; next time it would be something bigger.  His brothers and sisters teased him because his first hunt had been such a small creature.  His mother told him to pay no attention to them.  The important thing was that he had become a hunter.  The first kill was the hardest.  He had killed the grasshopper; the next hunt would be easy.

 One day some people came to their home and captured his mother.   She barked at her babies to hide, but the people began to tear apart the porch that had been their home.  Great Hunter squeezed into the smallest, darkest corner he could find.  He heard the cracking of the wood as the people broke the porch apart. He heard the yelps when one of his brothers or sisters was caught.  People shouted and dust filled the air.

 Great Hunter stayed very still and very quiet as he hid in his dark corner.  Gradually the noises of breaking wood stopped.  He heard the voices of people and the sudden yelp as one of his sisters was found and captured.  He heard his mother barking at her children to hide, but her bark was far away and muffled.  He also heard the whining of his captured brothers and sisters.  They sounded far away and muffled, too.

 Finally the sound of people talking faded away.  Sudden loud rumbling noises made it impossible for Great Hunter to hear his family.  Great Hunter remained shaking fearfully long after the loud rumblings faded away in the distance.  It was quiet a long time before Great Hunter crawled out of his hiding place into the bright sunlight.

             The porch he had lived under with his family was gone.  So was his family.  All that was left were scattered pieces of broken wood.  He searched frantically for his mother and the rest of his family.  They were nowhere to be found.  He whined and howled, calling for them.  His calls went unanswered. 

He kept searching what was left of his home, hoping to find a clue where his family had gone.  He also hoped to find some leftover food.  There wasn’t even a scrap of food.  And there was no smell trail to lead him to his family.  Great Hunter finally sat down and howled in misery.

 Then he thought about his mother and all the stories she had told him.  She had told him to always remember that he was a great hunter and had already killed prey.  He didn’t feel much like a great hunter now.  But his mother said it was true, so it must be.  What would a great hunter do in this situation?  He would hunt for food and a new home, like the brave puppies in the stories his mother told him.

 Great Hunter sniffed the air carefully in all directions.  Suddenly he caught a whiff of something that smelled tasty.  It came from down the street.   He started towards the smell, moving away from his home.  He took one sad look back at the scattered boards that showed where he and his family had been so happy.  He hated to leave.  But he was so hungry he had to find food.  With a sad howl, he turned away from his old home and walked away to look for food.

 It wasn’t far to the wonderful smell.  The smell came from a large metal box on wheels.  It was too big for him to climb in.  He walked around the box several times, looking for a way in.  Finally he gave up and crawled underneath the box.  The smell of food so close, yet unreachable, made him feel even hungrier.

 Great Hunter heard a thump of something landing next to the big metal box.  He poked his head out from under the box and saw a strange animal with big yellow eyes.  He thought of his mother’s stories.

“Are you a cat?” He asked politely.

 “Of course I’m a cat, little puppy.  Are you one of the puppies from under the porch they raided today?”  The cat stared at him.

 “Yes.  They took my family and I’m all alone and very hungry.  Please tell me how to get into this box to get the food inside?” 

 “You are too small to jump into the box, besides it’s dangerous inside.  You will need to get someone to help you.”

 Great Hunter was suddenly hopeful.  Maybe this cat would help him and be his friend.  “Can you help me?” he asked eagerly.

 “Me help you?  I can’t be saddled with a pesky puppy.  But there is a man coming down the road now.  He has been kind to animals in the past, and he has no pet of his own.  If you come out from under that box and act very friendly to him, he might help you.”

 Great Hunter was hurt at being called a pesky puppy.  “I wouldn’t be pesky.  I am a great hunter and I have killed my first prey.”

 “That may be true.  But the fact is, I won’t help you, but this man might.  So pull that fat little hunter’s body of yours out from under that garbage box and start acting cute.  The man is almost here.”  After saying that, the cat ran quickly away.

 Great Hunter quickly squirmed out from under the box.  He was so afraid the man would pass the box before he got out that he started whining in excitement and fear.  The man heard him whining and came over to look at him.

 “Hello little puppy, did that big old cat scare you?  He’s not likely to hurt you, but a little thing like you wouldn’t know that.” 

 The voice sounded friendly, and remembering the cat’s words that this man could help, the puppy allowed the man’s huge hands to pick him up.  The man turned him over, looking at every part of him.  ‘Act cute’ the cat had said.  How do I act cute? Great Hunter wondered.  I can kiss him like I used to kiss my mother.  The thought of his mother made him whine sadly and the man immediately stopped twisting the puppy and held him close.  Great Hunter started to lick every part of the man within reach.

 “Did I hurt you Puppy?  Hey! You are a friendly little thing aren’t you?  I’ll bet you came from the litter that was rescued today by the animal rights group.  They had some nice homes found for that group of puppies.  I’ll take you home and we’ll call them.  You are too nice a puppy not to have a good home.”  The man tucked Great Hunter into his arms and started walking.  The puppy didn’t understand the words the man spoke, but the voice and hands were kind.  He snuggled into the man’s arms and watched to see what would happen next.

 The man took him to a house and gave him a bowl of something he called bread and milk.  Great Hunter had never tasted anything quite like it before, but it was good and filled his hungry belly.  Then the man picked up something and began talking.  He wasn’t talking to Great Hunter.  He seemed to be talking to someone who wasn’t there. After a few minutes the man put the thing in his hands down and picked up the puppy.

 “Well, puppy.  The people who took your family already left town to take them to their new homes.  I don’t have any way to get you to them, and the people aren’t coming back.  So I guess we will have to find you a home somewhere around here.”

             Great Hunter still couldn’t understand the words, but he was glad the man was talking to him.  He licked the man’s face, and curled up against him to go to sleep.  He missed his family, but he was very glad to be with this man and not alone under that metal box.

 When Great Hunter woke up, it was dark.  He was alone in some kind of box.  At first he couldn’t remember where he was.  Then he heard the man snoring nearby, and he remembered everything.  He wished he were with his family instead of alone in this box.  He began to whine softly.  The man woke up and spoke gently to him.  “It’s okay puppy.  Go back to sleep.”  The man’s big hand reached down into the box and gently stroked him.  He didn’t understand the words, but the voice was kind and the hand was gentle.  Great Hunter went back to sleep, and didn’t wake up again until morning.

 After breakfast, the man set out to find Great Hunter a home.  He carried the little puppy in his arms and walked down the street for a long time.  Great Hunter enjoyed the walk.  He could look all around.  He wanted to get down and sniff, but the man was walking too fast.

 They came to a pretty white house with a white picket fence.  There was a lovely green lawn and beautiful flowerbeds.  The man walked purposely toward the front door.

“There is a little girl who lives in this house,” the man said.  “I think she would like a playful puppy with sparkling black eyes.  Now you stay here by my feet and we’ll see how you get along with her.”  The man set the puppy down by his feet and rang the doorbell. 

A tall woman answered the door and began talking to the man.  She was so tall, the puppy felt a little afraid of her.  Great Hunter stayed close to the man’s feet.  Suddenly a little girl in a starched blue dress with curly blonde hair came to the door.   The puppy was glad to see someone smaller, and he bounded joyfully towards the girl to play.

Instead of petting him, the little girl screamed and grabbed her mother.  The scream scared Great Hunter and he ran back to the man’s feet.  The man gently picked up the puppy and said good-bye to the lady and her daughter.

“Well, puppy, I didn’t know she was afraid of dogs.  We will have to find a better home for you.”  They walked along to another house the man knew of.

 The next house was blue and had a chain-link fence.  The lawn wasn’t as big, and there weren’t many flowers.  There were toy trucks and little shovels with buckets next to interesting looking holes.

“There is a boy living here,” the man said to the puppy.  He is a rough and tumble boy and would love to run and play with a cute puppy like you.”  The man set the puppy down by his feet and knocked on the door.

The woman who answered the door this time wasn’t as tall as at the last house, but she still looked scary to Great Hunter.  Suddenly a little boy ran out of the door.  Before Great Hunter had time to move, the boy had raced over and picked the puppy up by one hind leg.  He ran to his mother waving the puppy in the air, still holding him by the leg. 

“Look Mom. A puppy! Can we keep him? Can we?”

Great Hunter yelped in terror. He was dizzy from being upside down, and he felt he was about to fall.  He was very happy when he felt the man’s hands around him, taking him away from that nasty boy.

“I’m sorry.” The man was saying.  “This puppy belongs to someone else.  I’m on my way to deliver him now, and I just stopped by to see if you needed me this afternoon.”

The woman assured the man she didn’t need him, and they left.  The puppy could still hear the boy yelling and crying for a long way down the road.

“I guess I need to find a special home for you, puppy.  Scared girls and rough and tumble boys are definitely out.”  Suddenly the man smiled as he got an idea.  “I think I know just the boy for you, puppy. “  They started off in another direction.

 This time the house was green with white trim.  It had a lovely yard and beautiful flowerbeds.  The man did not put the puppy by his feet this time, but kept holding him.  A woman answered the door, but she didn’t look so scary to Great Hunter from his safe perch in the man’s arms. 

“I’ve brought a friend to visit Paul.”  The man said to the woman, holding up the puppy.

“He’ll like that.” The woman answered and the man followed her into the house to a room with a young boy sitting in a chair.  The boy excitedly reached for the puppy and began petting him gently.   Great Hunter liked how gently the boy handled him, and began licking the boy’s face.  The boy laughed and gently played with the puppy on his lap.  After a few moments, Great Hunter looked around the room.  The floor looked too far away to jump down, so he sat down on the boy's lap.  Suddenly the chair the boy was sitting in made an odd sound and the chair moved across the floor.  Great Hunter was scared for a moment, but he sensed the boy wasn’t afraid and the man was still smiling.  So he relaxed and watched as the chair carried them both around the room.

 “Look Mom! Look Mr. Jones!  He’s not afraid of my wheelchair.  Do you think I could keep him?”

 “Well, I don’t know.  What so you think, Mr. Jones?   A puppy is a big responsibility for a boy in a wheelchair.”

 “I brought the puppy because Paul is in a wheelchair.  He is growing up and is going to start needing help.  I’ll come over every week and teach Paul how to train the puppy.  I know it will be hard at first, but lots of crippled people have dogs to help them.  Just like blind people have dogs to see for them and deaf people have dogs to hear for them.  The puppy can start by picking up things Paul drops.  As he gets better trained, he can take messages to you and back to Paul.  Paul can train him to do tricks, too. 

 “That would be fun!  I’ll bet this is a smart puppy.  Mr. Jones knows a lot about training dogs, don’t you?”

             Paul’s mother smiled.  “Well, I wanted to get a trained dog to help Paul.  But there aren’t many and the waiting list is long.  Do you really think we can train him ourselves, Mr. Jones?"

             “I do.  And I think training the dog will be good for Paul, too.  Right now, the main thing is to just love the puppy.  I’ll bring over a book on puppy training tomorrow, and we can start right away?”

             “Isn’t he too young to train?” asked Paul.

             “Not if we make training a big game.  Of course, we will start with easy things like teaching him his name and how to come and sit.  But I think we can get him picking up the pencils you drop before too many weeks go by.”

      Paul’s mother gladly gave her permission for Paul to keep Great Hunter. 

Of course, Paul didn’t know dog language, and didn’t know his puppy had been named Great Hunter.  So Paul named his new puppy Radar.  And Great Hunter didn’t know human language, so as he learned to come to the name Radar, he believed Radar was the human word for Great Hunter.

They were very happy together. 

 

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